Mrs. and Mr. Vinod Agarwal had three children. The third
child was a son, born because the first two weren’t. Incidentally, Mr.
Agarwal’s younger brother also produced a son in the same month. They rented
the colony garden to throw a lavish party for the entire neighbourhood to
honour the arrival of their two miracles – Ashu and Abhi. We were a bit
surprised because Mrs. Agarwal and Lata aunty, the second daughter-in-law of
the house, never saw eye to eye. ‘Marwari hain, to save money ofcourse,’
I had heard mom tell Rekha aunty.
When Ashu was ten months old, Mrs. Agarwal decided she
wanted to go to a kitty party hosted in a bungalow which was 100 metres away. She
asked me, her 12-year-old, friendly, next door neighbour if I could stay in her
room for an hour because who asks the adult sister-in-law in the next room. I
was usually more at the Agarwal house than my own, savouring their bhujias
more than my mother’s sukhe alu, so this was not extraordinary.
It was a surprisingly pleasant summer day and I was totally
engrossed in my books from the library. I hogged on to dal, chawal and a whole
of mango, hoping nothing will spill on the pages. Between spoonsful of
deliciousness, I told my mom I’ll be baby-sitting. Her expressions were less
than agreeable, but when it came to Agarwal house, she didn’t bother much. I
was just a family member there as I was here!
I let myself into their house and started climbing the stairs.
The ground floor belonged to Mr. Agarwal’s parents who were constantly watching
every move of mine.
‘The girls are downstairs,’ Dadima said in her shrill voice.
‘They are sleeping.’
‘I am going to meet Aunty,’ I replied turning back and
literally ran lest she started questioning me like Karamchand.
Mrs. Agarwal was dressed up in her finest blue saree. With
matching bangles and a platform sandal that I hadn’t seen since Ashu’s party,
she looked happy to be stepping out after months.
‘I will be back in an hour. Just feed him this milk if he
cries,’ she said handing me the bottle. ‘You won’t get time to read your book;
he is a handful!’ she added.
Now Julian was about to solve a great mystery. He, Geroge
and Timmy were all set and so was I. As soon as she left, I knocked on Lata
aunty’s door. I told her Ashu was alone in the next room and I could take Abhi
too and they could play together. ‘Did you ask Bhabhi?’ she asked.
‘No, but she will not know.’
Ashu and Abhi had never played together. Apparently, Lata
aunty was loved by the entire family only because, according to Mrs. Agarwal,
her firstborn was a son. Even though Mrs. Agarwal was the elder one, she never
felt she was given much importance. There are bound to be differences, I
had heard mom saying.
I flipped through the last pages of my Famous Five while
Ashu and Abhi managed to play with each other and the bucketful of toys for
more than 45 minutes. Meanwhile, Lata aunty served tea to her in-laws’
downstairs, took a quick 15-minute nap and brought me a piece of samosa.
‘It’s time. I need to take Abhi back in my room.’ she said
picking up the little munchkin and started walking out.
Ashu tried to crawl behind them but I picked him up. He let
out a whimper and so I grabbed his bottle and started to feed him. Just then Mrs.
Agarwal came in hurriedly and inquired ‘Did he bother you?’
‘Not at all, he was his sweetest self,’ I said while handing
Ashu to her. I kissed him goodbye and walked out of the room with the finished
book in my hand.
I closed the door behind me and peeked into the next room.
Lata aunty gave me the warmest smile and a flying kiss and I wondered if Ashu
and Abhi will be playing together anytime soon.
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This story is a part of AtoZ challenge by Blogchatter. For the 2020 challenge, I'll be writing some travel stories and some stories that originate in my life but find a way into this blog through fiction. I am new at penning fiction, so please be kind!
Sad mentality... Can't be helped again I guess :)!Great narration... Was an interesting read.
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The small delights of life? :)
ReplyDeleteI don't know what you mean!
DeleteAh, the politics in the house that the kids have to deal with and keep up. Enjoyed the narration.
ReplyDeleteStory of all of us who grew up before the concept of nuclear families came up.
DeletePoor Ashu and Abhi ..good one
ReplyDeleteThis is the problem with family politics, the kids can't have the fun that they could.
Deletewell written. I guess the story is inspired by R.. K...r?
ReplyDeleteMan!!! You remember the name R..K!!!! Proud of you!
DeleteYes it is, but only in parts.
I'm really enjoying these little snippets of your life Nisha. Well-narrated as usual!
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Thank you! I am finding this very hard to do... and we are just at I!!!
DeleteInteresting. I'm impressed at how you turn ordinary everyday stories into dilchasp pieces!
ReplyDeleteHaha! Thanks, means a lot! I am enjoying this as of now. I hope I can find ideas till Z!
DeleteInteresting read :)...loved the topic...its the elephant in the room that noone wants to talk about. Glad you took up this realistic topic for your series.
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ReplyDeleteThis is such a sad, regressive mentality! I wonder if the kids will ever get to play together.
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