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She always woke up before us and said
her prayers,
Took a bath and finished the morning
affairs.
With her hair rolled up in a neat
bun,
She seemed to me like the most
hardworking one.
When there was no housework she would
be seen knitting sweaters,
I would sit beside her and learn a
set of jumbled letters.
With a smile on her face she would
explain when I spelt wrong,
No harsh words? No slap on the face?
– I was bemused all along.
She would switch off the lights when
we left the room,
She would save a coin for a certain
day of doom.
She would carry used chaat pattas home
and throw in the bin,
Leaving water running was perhaps a
sin.
She would give us the best slice of
cake,
She would always cook for us, even if
she was out or had a headache.
It would take a few minutes. No
big deal – I would hear her say,
That composure was an inspiration at
the end of each day.
She would give all her savings to
someone in need,
She would let no one know about her
good deed.
And then she would run up the stairs
for it was the best exercise,
I call her an All-in-One, a
Superwoman to be precise.
She never told me to do this or that,
Being strong headed, I would have
opposed like a brat.
Instead she let her actions speak,
I thought that was clever, a brilliant
technique!
And now; I imitate her in a million
ways.
I save for a rainy day, I smile
through a difficult phase.
Polythene bags find little space in
my house,
Like her, I invest in the future
without a grouse.
Even simple things like rolling the
socks,
Packing a suitcase or checking the
locks.
The same things I found annoying as a
teenager
In more ways than one, I’ve become
exactly like her.
Order, Discipline, Calmness
Compassion, Diligence,
Patience,
Ah, now and then, I find myself doing
random acts of kindness,
But you wouldn’t know ‘cause I’ve
learnt NOT to aggressively profess.
This and so much more from a woman
like no other,
Better than life, situations, or any
school teacher.
Her subtle ways have always been my
supreme mentor,
I’ve seen and learnt so much
from my darling MOTHER!
Oh wow!! You better win this one :)
ReplyDeleteThankyou! Lets hope for the best!
DeleteSimply beautiful and a perfect ode to the mother who teaches us and leads us by example! :)
ReplyDeleteThankyou, Shilpa!
DeleteVery nicely written....almost all are values are ingrained in us by our lovely moms. Each day they strive to make their children the best. Great tribute to your mom and perfect contest entry. All the best!!
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Thankyou, Aditi! We all have the best mothers, don't we? :)
DeleteSimple but superb!
ReplyDeleteI guess Nisha can convey with poetry her subtlest feelings...
good one again!
That is so true. If I were to speak or write simple words, I would never be able to say this.
DeleteThankyou for your kind words!
You have knitted your emotions nicely in rhyme scheme
ReplyDeleteThankyou! :)
DeleteBeautiful...
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it!
DeleteBeautifully written, Nisha!
ReplyDeleteThankyou! It did not win :(
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